Next week marks the six month mark of writing Burning Violin, so I'm working on something a bit bigger than normal, you know, to make it special and such. So this week I'm being both lazy and shameless by posting one of my favorite scenes out of Katorga (my novel, available from Amazon in both paperback and for the Kindle). This scene captures a lot of the heart of the novel at once: it's brutal, terrifying, and yet darkly funny at the same time. There are few things more awkward than an author writing his own blurbs, so buy the book (or ten, don't be shy), and write your own awestruck blurbs for me to quote so that I don't sound like such a pompous twat typing about how awesome I am. Even though I am. Please enjoy...
A metal door was held open for Doug into a tiny room, no more than ten by ten, hardly the size of a decent bathroom. A metal table with three chairs sat in the center of the room, and a broad mirror Doug recognized from old police shows covered one wall. The room was otherwise bare concrete except for a drain at the center of the room right underneath the table. The leader pointed to the single chair on the opposite side of the table from the other two.
"Please take a seat there, Dr. Bradley, someone will be right with you," the man said and then leaned close to talk in a low voice. "These are desperate times, Doug, please do your best for the Republic."
Doug drew himself up straight and spoke as firmly as he could. "I will do whatever I can, sir. I'm a good party man, myself."
The man nodded and his lips touched on an enigmatic smile for a moment and then he left the room in a hurry, closing the door behind him with a loud click. Doug walked slowly to the chair and sat down. He looked idly over at the mirror and felt suddenly claustrophobic, the walls pulling in closer every moment. Doug shivered and stared at those other two seats. Some interminable amount of time later, it was impossible to sense time accurately surrounded by concrete and glaringly unnatural fluorescent lights, Doug nodded off, face lowering to the slick metal of the interrogation table.
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"Wake up you ignorant piece of shit fuck donkey," a voice screamed in Doug's ear. A finger roughly ran up the side of his chin, covered in drool. "You're slavering all over my goddamned table you drooling goat fucking cock monger."
Doug jerked up in the chair, almost falling over backwards before a hand caught him by his hair and steadied him. He couldn't see, the fluorescents were so bright they were blinding him, burning his retinas. Doug shouted out, and got a slap across his face for the trouble, cheek left stinging by a latex-gloved hand.
"What? Who? What?" Doug exclaimed. He blinked against the lights and began to see shapes. Men in the two seats across from him, another towering over him, holding his head up.
"Three fucking stupid questions that only a slut slit licking terrorist taint sucking whore of a traitor would even think to ask!" Another slap across his face. "I've fucked sheep to death that made me less sick than you!"
"Now, now, Robert, why don't you go take a breather now that our friend has woken up," one of the men across the table said. The voice sounded so kind that Doug almost whimpered. The instinct made him feel ill, reminding him of dogs he had put down.
Robert shoved Doug so hard that he tumbled out of the chair and it landed on top of his head. Doug cowered for a moment, expecting a kick or another tirade, but Robert only paused to spit in his face before exiting the room. Doug lay there for a moment before standing on shaking legs, wiping the spittle from his face with the end of his silk tie as his stomach roiled in protest. He picked up the chair with hands that hadn't shaken so badly since his wedding day and looked around for his bag, desperately needing a valium. His bag was on the other side of the table, behind the two men. Doug refused to ask for it, and sat down in his chair. He took a deep breath and composed himself.
"There must have been a terrible mistake," he said. "That man I came here with told me that the Republic needed me. I came as quickly as I could and am at the government's service."
The two men exchanged a look. They both wore the gray and red uniforms of the world police. Doug thought that the three bars on each of their breasts meant that they were captains, but all he knew about such things were from television and movies, all of which were spinning nightmare scenarios before his eyes from memory.
"I am Lieutenant Thomas, and this is Lieutenant Allen," the man on the right said. The man on the left said nothing, but stared at Doug through squinting eyes and lit a cigarette. "I assure you that there has been no mistake. We are quite aware of your activities and all we want to do is help you as best we can. But make no mistake, we know absolutely everything, we just need to hear it from you."
"What are you talking about?" Doug asked. "I came here to help."
"And you can help," Thomas said gently. "You can help by telling us the names and addresses of all of your co-conspirators." He leaned forward and placed his hand on Doug's. "It is essential to the security of the state that we know exactly what the plan is, in your own words. We have to stop your friends before it is too late."
Doug opened and closed his mouth repeatedly. "But I haven't done anything!"
Thomas sighed and rubbed his eyes with both hands. Allen blew a long cloud of smoke at Doug. "Was your wife in on it?"
Doug blinked. "No, of course not."
"Then you admit you were?" Allen asked.
"Were what?" Doug asked.
"In on it." Allen said.
"On what?"
"It."
"No."
Allen paused for a moment. "What it weren't you in on?"
"It?"
"It."
"What?"
"Exactly." Allen said and blew out another long cloud of smoke. "How can you know your wife was not part of it, if you don't know what it is?"
"She wasn't in on anything!" Doug said.
"So you must have inside information on the plan, if you do know for a fact that she was not involved. And even if she is not involved, your involvement makes her an accessory and thus involved just as much as if she were involved." Allen said, he leaned back and blew out another cloud of smoke, tapping the ashes off his cigarette onto the concrete floor with a look of satisfaction like a mathematician having finished a twenty page long geometric proof.
Thomas leaned forward again. "Look Doug, I know you're protecting her. Hell, if our positions were reversed, I'd try to protect my wife too, but you can't drag her down with you. You have a chance to make things right here. Take responsibility, turn in the guys in charge, I know you were just going along with it out of friendship, you weren't really a terrorist, right? I mean, if you don't confess and tell us what we already know, then we're going to have to assume that Caroline was involved, and have Robert go bring her in and interrogate her. And I don't think anyone wants that except for Robert."
"But I didn't do anything!" Doug shouted.
Thomas shook his head. "Come on man, it's over. But don't drag Caroline down with you. And little Alice, I mean if you're lucky she'd get put into foster care, but really with two parents classified as anti-social, there's not much of a chance of her not getting sent off-world to work off some of your debt."
"Quit saying their names!" Doug yelled. "You have no right, you don't even know them!" He sobbed.
"Shhh, I know, I'm sorry." Thomas said, and patted Doug's hand again. "Just tell us what happened."
"You were part of a group plotting to smuggle a dirty nuke into the Los Angeles spaceport, weren't you?" Allen asked. He opened a folder and threw dozens of pictures of Doug talking to various people, passing them by on the street, looking at various public buildings. "We've had you under surveillance for quite some time and have tracked down most of your associates, but we need your help to convict them."
Allen folded his hands in front of him. "So should we talk about it, or should we have Robert go get your wife and daughter and get answers out of them?"
Burning Violin #25 - Katorga Redux
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